Cinderella and Her Sisters (rewrite)
Amanda, Bella and Cinderella
Once upon a time, there lived Mr. and Mrs. Smith. They expected little from life, but they always hoped to have a son. When there first two children were both daughters, they were slightly disappointed, but they were certain that they would have a son next time.
Thus, when Mrs. Smith became pregnant again, they excitedly thought of names for him. Unfortunately, it was another girl and they had not thought of any names for a girl. After quick deliberations, they decided to cal her Cinderella Prudence Smith, since it was near Christmas and her great-grandmother Prudence Smith had recently died. It seemed like a good idea at the time.
After that, Mr. and Mrs. Smith gave up hope of having a son. They had enough problems coping with three daughters.
It came to pass that Cinderella grew up to be beautiful, as in the fairy story, but, unlike the fairy story, she did not spend all her time at home doing the housework. In fact, she did not spend much time at home. She always seemed to be out.
She left school as soon as she could, because it interfered with her social life. After a short secretarial course, she quickly found a job as a receptionist with a large international Bank.
She coped easily with the job. She knew how to be nice to the right people, how to make them feel important and how to laugh at their bad jokes. The typing could be a problem, but her bosses seemed not to mind her mistakes and even to enjoy helping her to correct her errors.
She called herself Cindy in order to avoid too many jokes about her name and people always abbreviated it anyway. She was careful how she looked and kept in shape, keeping her curves in the right places. She dressed to impressed and usually succeeded.
She took her social life seriously. Work was a means of earning spending money and meeting new people. She was not looking to settle down, since she was enjoying herself too much. She appeared easy-going, but she always managed to work things to her advantage.
Cinderella liked variety in her life. Men passed through her life in rapid succession, being discarded when they had served their purpose, or somebody more interesting happened to come along. There were some recurring themes, such as dark hair and smart dressers, and there was even an Italian period. She could afford to be discriminating as the supply seemed to be endless.
She developed expensive tastes, but managed to live cheaply. She seldom had to pay for her frequent excursions and received a steady stream of little gifts. Things just seemed to happen for her with little effort on her part. She did not seem to need a fairy godmother.
By contrast, life seemed more of a struggle for Cinderella’s two sisters.
The eldest, Amanda had worked hard through school and university, and had qualified as a teacher. It gave her a purpose in life. She was cool and efficient, never wasting time on fancy frills. She had no time for frivolous socialising, mainly because she found it so boring.
She cared more about her work than her looks. Her clothes were functional rather than decorative. She kept her hair short for convenience rather than any cosmetic reasons. She knew how to look after herself and gave more thought to her career than trivial socialising.
Amanda lived simply, taking pleasure in helping others rather than selfish pursuits. She relentlessly strove to improve herself. She always had things to do and tried to avoid wasting time. She was going to make things happen. She would educate her pupils, whether they liked it or not. It was for their own good.
The second sister, Bella, worked as a nurse. It was demanding work, as she had to be ready for the unexpected. She experienced both the best and the worst of human nature, from the saintly to the sickening. This was reflected in her dark sense of humour.
She enjoyed her work, most of the time. The patients could be difficult and the nurse always seemed to get the blame when things went wrong. Much of her work was routine, but someone had to do it.
Bella was often too tired to do much after work. She liked to dress up but rarely got the chance. She had so few decent clothes anyway, since she rarely found time to go shopping. While she wished she was better-looking, she accepted the way she was. Food seemed to be one of her comforts in life. She was concerned about her weight but never enough to do much about it.
She liked to take things easy, but rarely felt in control of her life. There always seemed to be problems of one sort or another, a cloud to every silver lining. She hoped for wonderful things to happen to her, but they never seemed to do so. However she was not someone to moan about life and she took what pleasures she could.
Amanda and Bella were not ugly but they could not compete with the obvious attractions of Cinderella. Life seemed harder work for them. They both accepted this in their own ways, but they still did not like being referred to as an "Ugly Sister”.
Sadly their mother had died in a car crash when the sisters were all young. Their father had remarried and had since gone to work abroad with their nice step-mother.
Thus, the house in East London was left for the three sisters to share while their parents were away. Growing up together, they had shared the disappointments of life, in particular the loss of their mother. Although they liked their nice step-mother, she could never replace their natural mother. So the sisters became use to relying on each other and were able to accept their differences.
One evening, Bella answered the phone. The caller started off “Hello gorgeous” and proceeded to deliver a monologue of flattering remarks and outrageous compliments. It did not take Bella long to realise from the various physical references that the call was for Cinderella, but she was enjoying the flow of endearing compliments and found it difficult to interrupt. Finally she managed to say Cindy was out, at which the caller abruptly came to a halt, said sorry and rang off.
Cinderella returned home later. She had been out with some of the other secretaries from work and they had spent much of the evening swapping stories about the men at work. One in particular, called Peter, was always ringing people up and saying ridiculous things.
Later that week, Cinderella was at home to wash her hair. She did not rush such things. She was still drying her hair when the doorbell rang. It was a friend of Amanda, a fellow teacher called Michael. He had had the afternoon off and had arranged with Amanda to go together to an opera in the evening. As Cinderella let him into the house to wait for Amanda, Michael tried not to notice that Cinderella only had a towel wrapped round her.
Amanda arrived back from work coughing. She did not feel up to going to the opera. Michael was commiserating with her when Cinderella, now dressed, said she was free for the evening and offered to take Amanda’s place, rather than waste the ticket. Michael tried not to look too pleased.
Amanda was still not feeling well the following morning, but it was Saturday, so she was able to stay in bed. One of the young doctors with whom Bella was working had come round to borrow some text books and, when he heard Amanda coughing, he offered to help. Bella had already told her sister to stop moaning, as the cough would soon go. Nick, the doctor, offered to fetch some medicine which he himself took when he had a cold.
Bella was not impressed. Anyway Nick went off and shortly returned with the medicine. After he had gone, Bella described him as a hypochondriac, who was always encouraging the patients to be ill by dispensing unnecessary medicines. Amanda took the medicine anyway.
Meanwhile, Cinderella was just getting up. She had enjoyed her night at the opera. Afterwards they had gone for a meal and spent hours discussing the performance. She had not realised that it could be such fun. Michael was taking her to another opera on the following Tuesday.
Cinderella was talking about the opera at work, but not everyone believed her new enthusiasm. Indeed, Peter came round to check that she really was at the opera. He found only Bella home. They chatted on the doorstep about Cindy before Peter, having nothing better to do, asked her out for a drink. Bella was so surprised, she said yes.
They managed to pass the evening in a relaxed mood, not worrying about anything. Bella was not bothered that Peter found her sister so attractive, as she was used to that happening. She was just enjoying the casual chat.
Eventually, Peter saw her home, but he did not linger. He did not want Cindy to catch him checking up on her. However Bella did not return to an empty house. Nick had come round to see how his patient, Amanda, was getting on. Amanda had been well enough to go to work, but was glad to have someone to talk to after coming back from school. She happened to mention missing the opera and Nick had offered to take her later in the week.
Over the next few months, the three sisters seemed very busy.
One Friday evening, Cinderella went out to a musical with Michael. Afterwards, they went to an expensive, French restaurant. Cinderella had seen a lot of Michael since they had first gone to the opera together.
She enjoyed his company. He always knew of something exciting for them to do. He was a good talker and knew how to impress. He told her of his plans to give up teaching and go into his father’s business.
After dinner, they took a gentle stroll by the river and stopped to watch the water flow by. It was then that Michael asked Cinderella to marry him. She did not hesitate to say yes.
Amanda had also gone out for the evening. She had gone with Nick, the young doctor, to see a play by Harold Pinter. Afterwards they went for a meal in a quiet restaurant. Amanda had seen a lot of Nick over the previous few months. They shared a similar serious outlook on life.
They both took their work very seriously and worked long hours. They admired each other’s commitment and shared a common concern for others. They started talking about how much they enjoyed each other’s company and they mutually agreed that they should get married.
Bella, on her way back home from work, met up with Peter and a few friends for a drink. Later some of them decided to go to an Indian restaurant for a meal. It was an informal gathering and Bella enjoyed the casual gossiping. She found Peter easy to get on with and he seemed to like her dark humour. They had been out together many times in the previous few months. They just enjoyed each other’s company and not being alone.
After the meal, the group split up to go home, as it was getting late. As Peter walked with Bella to the underground station, Peter suggested the idea of getting married. At first Bella thought he was joking and burst out laughing, but then she saw the look on his face. After a moment’s hesitation, as she tried to think clearly, she agreed to the suggestion.
Amanda and Cinderella were both waiting for her by the time Bella got home. She had decided not to tell them her news, but, when they both said that they were getting engaged, she had to tell them.
The next day, Cinderella went out shopping with Michael and Bella rang Peter to check that he really had meant what he had said the previous evening. Amanda went on preparing her lessons as usual.
That afternoon, they phoned their parents. It was a long call. Mr. and Mrs. Smith took a while to take it all in. Their next visit to England was spent meeting all the future in-laws and planning for the big event. It had been agreed that the three sisters would all get married at the same time, “to get it all over in one go”, as Mr. Smith put it.
The wedding preparations were frantic. Everyone had their own ideas about how things should be done. Amanda would fume at the waste, as Cinderella merrily ordered expensive frills, while Bella tried to keep the peace.
The wedding was a grand, if complicated occasion. The brides all wore white and , thanks to Cinderella, were all late to the church. At the reception, the speeches went on a long time, with everyone making the same jokes about Cinderella and the ugly sisters.
And it came to pass that nine months later the three sisters each gave birth to a son. Mr. Smith was delighted at last to have male descendents, even though none of them would be carrying on the family name. Things were complicated enough already without having any more Mr. Smiths around.
And they all lived happily ever after.
The End.
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Wednesday, 25 December 2013
Thursday, 24 May 2012
Cinderella and Her Sisters - outline
An outline for a film:
Cinderella and Her Sisters
Cinderella and Her Sisters
- a story about three sisters in modern times
Mr Smith always hoped to have a son but instead
he has three daughters. The first Anna is serious
and becomes a teacher. The next Belinda
is caring and becomes a nurse. The third Cinderella
is beautiful and knows how to use her looks.
After the death of their mother,
the sisters become
used to looking
after each other.
Their father remarries
but then goes to work in the Middle East so the sisters share a large house together
despite their different
outlooks on life.
Anna and Belinda work hard at their jobs but Cindy finds an
easy, well-paid job as a receptionist for a law firm and has a busy social life.
Then Anna starts going out with Nick, a doctor who works with Belinda, who goes out with Pete
who works for the law firm where Cindy is receptionist.
Meanwhile Cindy meets Mike who is a teacher with Anna.
The relationships
reflect the differences
between the sisters.
Anna and Nick have
serious conversations, Belinda
and Pete often
go to the pub together
and Mike tries hard to match Cindy’s
expectations.
One evening
Mike proposes to Cindy, Pete finds himself
asking Belinda to marry him and Anna and Nick mutually agree that they should get married.
It is
decided that it
would be easier
for them to
all get married
at the same
time so there
is a big
wedding to arrange.
Things do not go
smoothly but they
eventually manage to
all get married
to the right
partners, with the
help of colleagues,
Mr Smith and
their nice step-mother.
(Screenplay - Scene 1)
Friday, 4 November 2011
The Hat and the Actress
I had been Christmas shopping. At least I had been trying to do some Christmas shopping. I had not been very successful. In fact I had not been at all successful. Nothing seemed to be suitable. Giving up, I decided to go into a bookshop on Piccadilly before heading home. I knew that in the basement they had some bargain books so I went down the stairs and through the door.
As I entered the basement, there seemed to be a strange atmosphere. Something was not quite right. Then I noticed the hat moving around. From the way it was moving there must be a person under the hat, but the hat was so broad that it was difficult to see. It was as broad as a sombrero but flatter. It was completely flat apart from a small dome towards the middle of the hat. It seemed to be a very large hat but a very small head. It was dark red, perhaps crimson. Who would wear such a hat in a bookshop ?
As I moved towards the bargain books, the hat moved towards the assistant behind his large desk. The hat leaned forward to talk to the assistant. It was only then from my view from the bargain books that I had a glimpse of the person under the hat. It was only a brief glimpse but I could make out that the person was female and she looked like a young actress who was in a play in nearby Shaftesbury Avenue. There had been a story about how she had been attacked on the way to the theatre a few days before. Despite the incident she had “bravely” performed in the play that evening.
If it was her, it would explain the hat. She would have not wanted to be recognised and she would have worn the hat for protection. Clearly she was not used to wearing hats apart from special occasions such as weddings, so had ended up with an absurdly large hat. In trying to hide herself, she had unwittingly draw attention to herself as nobody could fail to spot such a wide-brimmed hat. It must have been awkward to wear, as while it stopped other people seeing your face it also hindered you seeing where you were going. She did have a female companion with her, presumably as a guide.
I just needed another look to confirm that it really was the actress. It so happened that the bargain books were the perfect position. In order to leave she would have to walk around the assistant’s desk and turn left just before the bargain books to the door to go upstairs. I just had to wait for her to leave.
She took a while talking to the assistant but then her companion walked towards the door. Her companion had short blonde hair and looked quite cute in jeans. She had that peculiar smile on her face while looking at the floor as she left. The hat paused before leaving. It was working out beautifully. The companion left through the door as the hat gathered up her shopping bags and started walking towards me. She even lifted up her head so I should get a good look before she turned to go out the door.
But then 2 things went wrong, 2 things that I had not anticipated. The first was that because of the broad rim of the hat her face was completely in shadow. I could not see her face at all. The second thing was that she was looking straight at me. I was not wearing a hat, so, although I could not see her face, she could see mine. Indeed there was a moment when our eyes seemed to meet. Assuming her eyes were in the right positions I must have been looking right into them but I could see nothing.
The moment soon passed and she turned towards the door. She seemed not to react, but then after she had gone out the door she suddenly said very loudly “How embarrassing !” She was clearly saying it to her companion who must have been waiting on the stairs. However what the actress was probably not aware was that the door had not fully shut behind her and her remark was clearly audible in the room she had just left. Nobody seemed to react in the room. The door then shut behind her so the rest of the conversation could not be heard.
So what was so embarrassing ? Had I missed something ? Was it really the actress or was it somebody completely different ? I tried to think things through. I think she was embarrassed because she was not aware that I could not see her face when our eyes met. Even then it should be me who was embarrassed, not her. Perhaps her companion had deliberately gone out ahead and that the actress had for some reason wanted to get a look at me, only to find me looking at her. But why would she want a look at me ?
Possibly she was just embarrassed about the awkwardness of the hat or she had had some problems with the assistant. Perhaps it was something that happened before I entered the scene. Perhaps it was not the actress. Sometimes it is better not to know and allow yourself to come to your own theory, but the moral of the story seems to be to always make sure the door is shut behind you before you say anything, unless you want to be overheard.
©Conor Cotter
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(The actress was Tara Fitzgerald. For her biography, see this web page )
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Thursday, 20 October 2011
Raging Balls - The Snooker Final
So here he is in the usual mess. It had going to be have been different this year. He had prepared so welll for the tournament. He had even been regularly to the gym. But it was no good, he had messed up again.
He had had a tricky opening match against the first female player to reach the final stages of the Snooker World Championship. He had not wanted to be the first top-16 player to lose to a woman. It had been bad enough for the players who had lost to her in qualifying. If he lost, he knew he would be endlessly reminded of it. On the other hand he had to show her respect as she had done so well to reach this stage. In the end he had won but there had been a few tricky opening frames and it had not been easy.
The next few rounds had gone okay. He was playing well and he had fairly comfortable wins.
The semi-finals were a clash of the nations. Strangely he was the last European left and faced a tricky Australian. The match went into the fourth session with a lead of 4 frames. The Aussie came back to nearly level the match but he had managed to hold on and win by winning 3 frames in a row.
In the other match the Chinese player was expected to easily beat his American opponent. It was the American Baxter's first year on the professional circuit and he had some good wins but his opponent Chen was bound to be too strong for him. Chen had had a great year and was number one in the current rankings . However Baxter had a run of high breaks and got into the lead. Somehow Baxter managed to maintain his long potting and he was the surprise winner.
In the final Baxter was again the underdog. The first American to play to this standard and in his first year. He couldn't possibly win could he? Here he was playing the great Nick 'Nasher' Harris, former world champion and favourite of the fans. The final would be a long match over four sessions. It was best of 35 frames over so it was first to 18 to win.
Baxter won the first two frames and then the next two. After the mid-session break Baxter won the next one, before Harris at last won a frame. By the end of the session it was 6-2 to the American.
The evening session was 4 frames each so the overnight score was 10-6 to Baxter. There was plenty of time for Harris to come back.
The next afternoon started well for Harris winning two frames but then Baxter won the next six frames. At the end of the afternoon session, Harris went back to his hotel room 16-8 down with Baxter only needing 2 frames to win the match and the Championship.
At the hotel, Harris's wife Barbara was waiting for him. Although they had been living separately, Barbara had been around for the Championship as a last attempt at reconciliation. However now she was leaving. He was bound to lose and there was no point hanging around. She would not be moving back in with him. Their relationship was over. He had hoped for a reconciliation if he won the tournament but there was not much chance of that. Nobody liked a loser he thought as she left.
Next his brother Phil came to see him. He was taking their mother home as the match was as good as over. Harris was disappointed as there was still a chance of a comeback but he could see that his brother had made his mind up.
Then his manager Steve came in. Harris was hoping for a bit of encouragement but Steve just told him to try to win a few frames to make the score more respectable and there was always next year.
So here he was about to lose the final, with his wife leaving him and even his own family giving up on him. He certainly had messed things up.
He feels stangely relaxed returning to the arena for the evening session. It wpuld not take long. He is glad to win the opening frame but then Baxter takes a good lead in the next frame. He needs one more red to seal the frame. Somehow the red catches the sides of the pockets and does not drop. Harris manages to clear the table and wins the frame by one point. He is still 6 frames down. 16-10
Baxter is going well in the next frame but is unlucky to have the white ball go into a pocket when he had achieved a difficult pot. Harris is fortunate to win the frame. The next frame Harris wins with a big break. Now he is only 4 frames behind. 16-12
By now Harris's brother has got their mother to her home. He switches on the TV and is surprised to see the match still going on. They both settle down to watch the final stages on TV.
Harris starts well in the next frame but then disaster strikes. He manages to snooker himself from the reds. Baxter takes advantage to win the frame. Now Baxter only needs to win one more frame to be champion. 17-12.
It seems all over for Harris so his mother switches off the TV and decides to go to bed. His brother Phil heads home to his wife and kids.
Baxter has a good chance to win the next frame with the balls nicely spread but he misses a pot to the middle and Harris wins the frame with another clearance break. 17-13.
In the next frame Harris starts well but misses a simple shot on the black. Baxter takes the lead with a big break but is unlucky and misses a difficult red pot, which could have won him the frame and the match. A relieved Harris manages to win the frame and he goes on to win the next frame with a big break. 17-15.
Harris has a large break on the next frame but Baxter has a chance of a clearance to win the frame. He gets as far a the final black but he misses and Harris pots the black to win the frame. 17-16.
When his brother Phil gets home he is surprised to find his son still up. He is watching the snooker and wants the American to win. Even Phil had to agree that the American had played well and deserved to win.
The next frame is very tight. Both players have small breaks and it is close with just the colours to go. Baxter edges ahead but misses the blue which was against a side cushion. Harris pots the blue and pink but misses the black. After a few attempts by both players Harris pots the black . 17-17.
It is the final frame. Whoever wins the frame is the winner. Baxter has a good break. He misses a difficult pot but he has established an apparently winning lead. Harris however manages to create a couple of snookers and the resulting penalty points against Baxter get Harris back into the frame. Again it comes down to the colours.
Harris pots the yellow and then the green but Baxter gets to pot the brown and then the blue. With only the pink and black to go, Baxter is ahead by 2 points so the pink will be enough for him to win. He settles down for the shot. He has taken the pressure well. Harris prepares himself for the defeat. He had got close but it was not enough.
Baxter hits the white a bit too hard and the pink hits both edges of the pocket and comes out. Harris is surprised and has to compose himself to pot the pink even though it should be an easy pot. However in making sure he pots the pink he ends up with the white badly placed for the black which is against the side cushion. He has to play a safety shot.
A nervous exchange of safety shots follows. Then Baxter decides to go for a long pot. If he makes it he wins. If he misses he is likely to leave Harris an easy shot.
The black heads towards the pocket but the angle is wrong and it misses by some way. Luckily for Baxter it is a bad miss that it leaves a difficult pot for Harris who also misses. Baxter has another go but again misses. Now Harris has a much simpler pot but like Baxter before he misses badly.
Baxter has another go but again the black stays out. The crowd find it difficult to keep still. Then Harris decides to take on the difficult pot. It gently hits the edge of the pocket and goes in. The crowd erupts. Harris has won.
The next morning Harris lies in his hotel bed. He goes over the events of the evening before. Why did he put himself through this? There had to a more sensible way to earn a living. But he had done it. He had shown he could win. He was in the record books as the winner.
Barbara his wife is asleep next to him. She had come back to see the last few frames. Perhaps there is some hope for his marriage. There is always a chance of a comeback.
The End
©Conor Cotter
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He had had a tricky opening match against the first female player to reach the final stages of the Snooker World Championship. He had not wanted to be the first top-16 player to lose to a woman. It had been bad enough for the players who had lost to her in qualifying. If he lost, he knew he would be endlessly reminded of it. On the other hand he had to show her respect as she had done so well to reach this stage. In the end he had won but there had been a few tricky opening frames and it had not been easy.
The next few rounds had gone okay. He was playing well and he had fairly comfortable wins.
The semi-finals were a clash of the nations. Strangely he was the last European left and faced a tricky Australian. The match went into the fourth session with a lead of 4 frames. The Aussie came back to nearly level the match but he had managed to hold on and win by winning 3 frames in a row.
In the other match the Chinese player was expected to easily beat his American opponent. It was the American Baxter's first year on the professional circuit and he had some good wins but his opponent Chen was bound to be too strong for him. Chen had had a great year and was number one in the current rankings . However Baxter had a run of high breaks and got into the lead. Somehow Baxter managed to maintain his long potting and he was the surprise winner.
In the final Baxter was again the underdog. The first American to play to this standard and in his first year. He couldn't possibly win could he? Here he was playing the great Nick 'Nasher' Harris, former world champion and favourite of the fans. The final would be a long match over four sessions. It was best of 35 frames over so it was first to 18 to win.
Baxter won the first two frames and then the next two. After the mid-session break Baxter won the next one, before Harris at last won a frame. By the end of the session it was 6-2 to the American.
The evening session was 4 frames each so the overnight score was 10-6 to Baxter. There was plenty of time for Harris to come back.
The next afternoon started well for Harris winning two frames but then Baxter won the next six frames. At the end of the afternoon session, Harris went back to his hotel room 16-8 down with Baxter only needing 2 frames to win the match and the Championship.
At the hotel, Harris's wife Barbara was waiting for him. Although they had been living separately, Barbara had been around for the Championship as a last attempt at reconciliation. However now she was leaving. He was bound to lose and there was no point hanging around. She would not be moving back in with him. Their relationship was over. He had hoped for a reconciliation if he won the tournament but there was not much chance of that. Nobody liked a loser he thought as she left.
Next his brother Phil came to see him. He was taking their mother home as the match was as good as over. Harris was disappointed as there was still a chance of a comeback but he could see that his brother had made his mind up.
Then his manager Steve came in. Harris was hoping for a bit of encouragement but Steve just told him to try to win a few frames to make the score more respectable and there was always next year.
So here he was about to lose the final, with his wife leaving him and even his own family giving up on him. He certainly had messed things up.
He feels stangely relaxed returning to the arena for the evening session. It wpuld not take long. He is glad to win the opening frame but then Baxter takes a good lead in the next frame. He needs one more red to seal the frame. Somehow the red catches the sides of the pockets and does not drop. Harris manages to clear the table and wins the frame by one point. He is still 6 frames down. 16-10
Baxter is going well in the next frame but is unlucky to have the white ball go into a pocket when he had achieved a difficult pot. Harris is fortunate to win the frame. The next frame Harris wins with a big break. Now he is only 4 frames behind. 16-12
By now Harris's brother has got their mother to her home. He switches on the TV and is surprised to see the match still going on. They both settle down to watch the final stages on TV.
Harris starts well in the next frame but then disaster strikes. He manages to snooker himself from the reds. Baxter takes advantage to win the frame. Now Baxter only needs to win one more frame to be champion. 17-12.
It seems all over for Harris so his mother switches off the TV and decides to go to bed. His brother Phil heads home to his wife and kids.
Baxter has a good chance to win the next frame with the balls nicely spread but he misses a pot to the middle and Harris wins the frame with another clearance break. 17-13.
In the next frame Harris starts well but misses a simple shot on the black. Baxter takes the lead with a big break but is unlucky and misses a difficult red pot, which could have won him the frame and the match. A relieved Harris manages to win the frame and he goes on to win the next frame with a big break. 17-15.
Harris has a large break on the next frame but Baxter has a chance of a clearance to win the frame. He gets as far a the final black but he misses and Harris pots the black to win the frame. 17-16.
When his brother Phil gets home he is surprised to find his son still up. He is watching the snooker and wants the American to win. Even Phil had to agree that the American had played well and deserved to win.
The next frame is very tight. Both players have small breaks and it is close with just the colours to go. Baxter edges ahead but misses the blue which was against a side cushion. Harris pots the blue and pink but misses the black. After a few attempts by both players Harris pots the black . 17-17.
It is the final frame. Whoever wins the frame is the winner. Baxter has a good break. He misses a difficult pot but he has established an apparently winning lead. Harris however manages to create a couple of snookers and the resulting penalty points against Baxter get Harris back into the frame. Again it comes down to the colours.
Harris pots the yellow and then the green but Baxter gets to pot the brown and then the blue. With only the pink and black to go, Baxter is ahead by 2 points so the pink will be enough for him to win. He settles down for the shot. He has taken the pressure well. Harris prepares himself for the defeat. He had got close but it was not enough.
Baxter hits the white a bit too hard and the pink hits both edges of the pocket and comes out. Harris is surprised and has to compose himself to pot the pink even though it should be an easy pot. However in making sure he pots the pink he ends up with the white badly placed for the black which is against the side cushion. He has to play a safety shot.
A nervous exchange of safety shots follows. Then Baxter decides to go for a long pot. If he makes it he wins. If he misses he is likely to leave Harris an easy shot.
The black heads towards the pocket but the angle is wrong and it misses by some way. Luckily for Baxter it is a bad miss that it leaves a difficult pot for Harris who also misses. Baxter has another go but again misses. Now Harris has a much simpler pot but like Baxter before he misses badly.
Baxter has another go but again the black stays out. The crowd find it difficult to keep still. Then Harris decides to take on the difficult pot. It gently hits the edge of the pocket and goes in. The crowd erupts. Harris has won.
The next morning Harris lies in his hotel bed. He goes over the events of the evening before. Why did he put himself through this? There had to a more sensible way to earn a living. But he had done it. He had shown he could win. He was in the record books as the winner.
Barbara his wife is asleep next to him. She had come back to see the last few frames. Perhaps there is some hope for his marriage. There is always a chance of a comeback.
The End
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Sunday, 18 September 2011
Coffee Shop Blues - a short story
Jane was on her way to the coffee shop. Too late she noticed her ex-boyfriend coming the other way. They almost bumped into each other as they tried to avoid each other. They exchanged a glance and moved on. Neither was pleased to see the other but nothing was said.
They had first met in the coffee shop. Jane had been fumbling for her purse and Rob had paid for her. They had had a pleasant conversation and Jane had returned the favour by buying him another coffee,
This had led to them going out together. They had got on well and found each other good company. Jane spent more and more time at Rob’s flat.
One evening she was at his flat waiting for Rob but he stayed out all evening and come back drunk. Jane went back to her flat. The next day Rob came round to apologise. He had been out with his friend Dave and they had a few drinks.
Much the same happened a few weeks later. It was just what he did with Dave. When he spent an evening with him they always ended up drunk whether they meant to or not. It was just how it was.
Other evenings Jane and Rob would go out together or perhaps stay in together and have a good time, so the relationship seemed to be progressing well despite Dave.
Then Dave started going out with a German barmaid called Nicole . He had fancied her for a while and finally got round to asking her out. The fact that she was German seemed to make her more exotic but the main appeal to Dave was that she had large breasts. He was a man of simple tastes.
It was decided that one Friday evening that the two couples would go out together. It was the first time that Jane had met Nicole. It was soon apparent that Nicole was very lively and she was very amusing. She found the English people so strange.
It was getting late when to amuse the men Nicole kissed Jane. The longer the kiss went on the more it pleased the men. Jane went along with the kiss so as not to spoil the fun. However after the kiss Nicole suggested that since they had enjoyed watching the women kiss so much the two men should kiss. Rob and Dave made their excuses. They had known each other for so long. They would never kiss each other as it was not that sort of relationship.
Nicole threatened to go unless they stopped being so boring and they should kiss each other. To encourage them she kissed them each in turn, first Dave and then an initially reluctant Rob. However they still would not kiss each other. So Nicole got up to leave. And she invited Jane to leave with her. Jane was not sure how things would work out but she decided to go with Nicole to teach the men a lesson.
Nicole and Jane went to a bar nearby and had a drink together. Nicole said she was bored with Dave and she was going to stop seeing him. Afterwards Jane went back to her own flat alone.
The next day Rob came round to talk things over. Dave was upset over Nicole leaving him. Rob thought that Dave had been badly treated. Jane thought that Dave had got what he deserved. It led to an argument between them. Rob thought Jane should be more sympathetic to Dave. Jane did not think much of Dave. Rob took the criticism of his friend badly and decided to end his relationship with Jane. Jane was glad when Rob left.
Jane went to collect her things from Rob’s flat. It was a difficult end to the relationship. They had had good times. The main problem had been Rob’s friendship with Dave. In the end it became a choice for Rob between his relationship with Dave and his relationship with Jane. As far as Rob was concerned it was an easy choice. He could not be disloyal to Dave, so it was goodbye to Jane. Jane understood this so little needed to be said. They both felt that the other should have been more understanding.
Thus it was that Jane felt awkward bumping into Rob again. She went to the coffee shop and sat down alone with a coffee at a table. As she looked out the window she saw Rob with his new girlfriend. Rob was carrying several shopping bags and looked flustered. It was clear that the girlfriend was in charge of the situation. Somehow this made Jane feel much better.
The End
©Conor Cotter
The End
©Conor Cotter
Thursday, 25 August 2011
Cinderella and Her Sisters
Once upon a time, there lived Mr. and Mrs. Smith. They expected little from life, but they always hoped to have a son. When there first 2 children were both daughters, they were slightly disappointed, but they were certain that they would have a son next time.
Thus, when Mrs. Smith became pregnant again, they excitedly thought of names for him. Unfortunately, it was another girl and they had not thought of any names for a girl. After quick deliberations, they decided to cal her Cinderella Prudence Smith, since it was near Christmas and her great-grandmother Prudence Smith had recently died. It seemed like a good idea at the time.
After that, Mr. and Mrs. Smith gave up hope of having a son. They had enough problems coping with three daughters.
It came to pass that Cinderella grew up to be beautiful, as in the fairy story, but, unlike the fairy story, she did not spend all her time at home doing the housework. In fact, she did not spend much time at home. She always seemed to be out.
She left school as soon as she could, because it interfered with her social life. After a short secretarial course, she quickly found a job as a receptionist with a large international Bank.
She coped easily with the job. She knew how to be nice to the right people, how to make them feel important and how to laugh at their bad jokes. The typing could be a problem, but her bosses seemed not to mind her mistakes and even to enjoy helping her to correct her errors.
She called herself Cindy in order to avoid too many jokes about her name and people always abbreviated it anyway. She was careful how she looked and kept in shape, keeping her curves in the right places. She dressed to impressed and usually succeeded.
She took her social life seriously. Work was a means of earning spending money and meeting new people. She was not looking to settle down, since she was enjoying herself too much. She appeared easy-going, but she always managed to work things to her advantage.
Thus, when Mrs. Smith became pregnant again, they excitedly thought of names for him. Unfortunately, it was another girl and they had not thought of any names for a girl. After quick deliberations, they decided to cal her Cinderella Prudence Smith, since it was near Christmas and her great-grandmother Prudence Smith had recently died. It seemed like a good idea at the time.
After that, Mr. and Mrs. Smith gave up hope of having a son. They had enough problems coping with three daughters.
It came to pass that Cinderella grew up to be beautiful, as in the fairy story, but, unlike the fairy story, she did not spend all her time at home doing the housework. In fact, she did not spend much time at home. She always seemed to be out.
She left school as soon as she could, because it interfered with her social life. After a short secretarial course, she quickly found a job as a receptionist with a large international Bank.
She coped easily with the job. She knew how to be nice to the right people, how to make them feel important and how to laugh at their bad jokes. The typing could be a problem, but her bosses seemed not to mind her mistakes and even to enjoy helping her to correct her errors.
She called herself Cindy in order to avoid too many jokes about her name and people always abbreviated it anyway. She was careful how she looked and kept in shape, keeping her curves in the right places. She dressed to impressed and usually succeeded.
She took her social life seriously. Work was a means of earning spending money and meeting new people. She was not looking to settle down, since she was enjoying herself too much. She appeared easy-going, but she always managed to work things to her advantage.
Cinderella liked variety in her life. Men passed through her life in rapid succession, being discarded when they had served their purpose, or somebody more interesting happened to come along. There were some recurring themes, such as dark hair and smart dressers, and there was even an Italian period. She could afford to be discriminating as the supply seemed to be endless.
She developed expensive tastes, but managed to live cheaply. She seldom had to pay for her frequent excursions and received a steady stream of little gifts. Things just seemed to happen for her with little effort on her part. She did not seem to need a fairy godmother.
By contrast, life seemed more of a struggle for Cinderella’s two sisters.
The eldest, Anna had worked hard through school and university, and had qualified as a teacher. It gave her a purpose in life. She was cool and efficient, never wasting time on fancy frills. She had no time for frivolous socialising, mainly because she found it so boring.
She cared more about her work than her looks. Her clothes were functional rather than decorative. She kept her hair short for convenience rather than any cosmetic reasons. She knew how to look after herself and gave more thought to her career than trivial socialising.
Anna lived simply, taking pleasure in helping others rather than helping herself. She relentlessly strove to improve herself. She always had things to do and tried to avoid wasting time. She was going to make things happen. She would educate her pupils, whether they liked it or not. It was for their own good.
The second sister, Belinda, worked as a nurse. It was demanding work, as she had to be ready for the unexpected. She experienced both the best and the worst of human nature, from the saintly to the sickening. This was reflected in her dark sense of humour.
She enjoyed her work, most of the time. The patients could be difficult and the nurse always seemed to get the blame when things went wrong. Much of her work was routine, but someone had to do it.
By contrast, life seemed more of a struggle for Cinderella’s two sisters.
The eldest, Anna had worked hard through school and university, and had qualified as a teacher. It gave her a purpose in life. She was cool and efficient, never wasting time on fancy frills. She had no time for frivolous socialising, mainly because she found it so boring.
She cared more about her work than her looks. Her clothes were functional rather than decorative. She kept her hair short for convenience rather than any cosmetic reasons. She knew how to look after herself and gave more thought to her career than trivial socialising.
Anna lived simply, taking pleasure in helping others rather than helping herself. She relentlessly strove to improve herself. She always had things to do and tried to avoid wasting time. She was going to make things happen. She would educate her pupils, whether they liked it or not. It was for their own good.
The second sister, Belinda, worked as a nurse. It was demanding work, as she had to be ready for the unexpected. She experienced both the best and the worst of human nature, from the saintly to the sickening. This was reflected in her dark sense of humour.
She enjoyed her work, most of the time. The patients could be difficult and the nurse always seemed to get the blame when things went wrong. Much of her work was routine, but someone had to do it.
Belinda was often too tired to do much after work. She liked to dress up but rarely got the chance. She had so few decent clothes anyway, since she rarely found time to go shopping. While she wished she was better-looking, she accepted the way she was. Food seemed to be one of her comforts in life. She was concerned about her weight but never enough to do much about it.
She liked to take things easy, but rarely felt in control of her life. There always seemed to be problems of one sort or another, a cloud to every silver lining. She hoped for wonderful things to happen to her, but they never seemed to do so. However she was not someone to moan about life and she took what pleasures she could.
Anna and Belinda were not ugly but they could not compete with the obvious attractions of Cinderella. Life seemed harder work for them. They both accepted this in their own ways, but they still did not like being referred to as “the Ugly Sister”.
Sadly their mother had died in a car crash when the sisters were all young. Their father had remarried and had since gone to work abroad with their nice step-mother.
Thus, the house in East London was left for the three sisters to share while their parents were away. Growing up together, they had shared the disappointments of life, in particular the loss of their mother. Although they liked their nice step-mother, she could never replace their natural mother. So the sisters became use to relying on each other and were able to accept their differences.
One evening, Belinda answered the phone. The caller started off “Hello gorgeous” and proceeded to deliver a monologue of flattering remarks and outrageous compliments. It did not take Belinda long to realise from the various physical references that the call was for Cinderella, but she was enjoying the flow of endearing compliments and found it difficult to interrupt. Finally she managed to say Cindy was out, at which the caller abruptly came to a halt, said sorry and rang off.
She liked to take things easy, but rarely felt in control of her life. There always seemed to be problems of one sort or another, a cloud to every silver lining. She hoped for wonderful things to happen to her, but they never seemed to do so. However she was not someone to moan about life and she took what pleasures she could.
Anna and Belinda were not ugly but they could not compete with the obvious attractions of Cinderella. Life seemed harder work for them. They both accepted this in their own ways, but they still did not like being referred to as “the Ugly Sister”.
Sadly their mother had died in a car crash when the sisters were all young. Their father had remarried and had since gone to work abroad with their nice step-mother.
Thus, the house in East London was left for the three sisters to share while their parents were away. Growing up together, they had shared the disappointments of life, in particular the loss of their mother. Although they liked their nice step-mother, she could never replace their natural mother. So the sisters became use to relying on each other and were able to accept their differences.
One evening, Belinda answered the phone. The caller started off “Hello gorgeous” and proceeded to deliver a monologue of flattering remarks and outrageous compliments. It did not take Belinda long to realise from the various physical references that the call was for Cinderella, but she was enjoying the flow of endearing compliments and found it difficult to interrupt. Finally she managed to say Cindy was out, at which the caller abruptly came to a halt, said sorry and rang off.
Cinderella returned home later. She had been out with some of the other secretaries from work and they had spent much of the evening swapping stories about the men at work. One in particular, called Peter, was always ringing people up and saying ridiculous things.
Later that week, Cinderella was at home to wash her hair. She did not rush such things. She was still drying her hair when the doorbell rang. It was a friend of Anna, a fellow teacher called Michael. He had had the afternoon off and had arranged with Anna to go together to an opera in the evening. As Cinderella let him into the house to wait for Anna, Michael tried not to notice that Cinderella only had a towel wrapped round her.
Anna arrived back from work coughing. She did not feel up to going to the opera. Michael was commiserating with her when Cinderella, now dressed, said she was free for the evening and offered to take Anna’s place, rather than waste the ticket. Michael tried not to look too pleased.
Anna was still not feeling well the following morning, but it was Saturday, so she was able to stay in bed. One of the young doctors with whom Belinda was working had come round to borrow some text books and, when he heard Anna coughing, he offered to help. Belinda had already told her sister to stop moaning, as the cough would soon go. Nick, the doctor, offered to fetch some medicine which he himself took when he had a cold.
Belinda was not impressed. Anyway Nick went off and shortly returned with the medicine. After he had gone, Belinda described him as a hypochondriac, who was always encouraging the patients to be ill by dispensing unnecessary medicines. Anna took the medicine anyway.
Meanwhile, Cinderella was just getting up. She had enjoyed her night at the opera. Afterwards they had gone for a meal and spent hours discussing the performance. She had not realised that it could be such fun. Michael was taking her to another opera on the following Tuesday.
Cinderella was talking about the opera at work, but not everyone believed her new enthusiasm. Indeed, Peter came round to check that she really was at the opera. He found only Belinda home. They chatted on the doorstep about Cindy before Peter, having nothing better to do, asked her out for a drink. Belinda was so surprised, she said yes.
Later that week, Cinderella was at home to wash her hair. She did not rush such things. She was still drying her hair when the doorbell rang. It was a friend of Anna, a fellow teacher called Michael. He had had the afternoon off and had arranged with Anna to go together to an opera in the evening. As Cinderella let him into the house to wait for Anna, Michael tried not to notice that Cinderella only had a towel wrapped round her.
Anna arrived back from work coughing. She did not feel up to going to the opera. Michael was commiserating with her when Cinderella, now dressed, said she was free for the evening and offered to take Anna’s place, rather than waste the ticket. Michael tried not to look too pleased.
Anna was still not feeling well the following morning, but it was Saturday, so she was able to stay in bed. One of the young doctors with whom Belinda was working had come round to borrow some text books and, when he heard Anna coughing, he offered to help. Belinda had already told her sister to stop moaning, as the cough would soon go. Nick, the doctor, offered to fetch some medicine which he himself took when he had a cold.
Belinda was not impressed. Anyway Nick went off and shortly returned with the medicine. After he had gone, Belinda described him as a hypochondriac, who was always encouraging the patients to be ill by dispensing unnecessary medicines. Anna took the medicine anyway.
Meanwhile, Cinderella was just getting up. She had enjoyed her night at the opera. Afterwards they had gone for a meal and spent hours discussing the performance. She had not realised that it could be such fun. Michael was taking her to another opera on the following Tuesday.
Cinderella was talking about the opera at work, but not everyone believed her new enthusiasm. Indeed, Peter came round to check that she really was at the opera. He found only Belinda home. They chatted on the doorstep about Cindy before Peter, having nothing better to do, asked her out for a drink. Belinda was so surprised, she said yes.
They managed to pass the evening in a relaxed mood, not worrying about anything. Belinda was not bothered that Peter found her sister so attractive, as she was used to that happening. She was just enjoying the casual chat.
Eventually, Peter saw her home, but he did not linger. He did not want Cindy to catch him checking up on her. However Belinda did not return to an empty house. Nick had come round to see how his patient, Anna, was getting on. Anna had been well enough to go to work, but was glad to have someone to talk to after coming back from school. She happened to mention missing the opera and Nick had offered to take her later in the week.
Over the next few months, the three sisters seemed very busy.
One Friday evening, Cinderella went out to a musical with Michael. Afterwards, they went to an expensive, French restaurant. Cinderella had seen a lot of Michael since they had first gone to the opera together.
She enjoyed his company. He always knew of something exciting for them to do. He was a good talker and knew how to impress. He told her of his plans to give up teaching and go into his father’s business.
After dinner, they took a gentle stroll by the river and stopped to watch the water flow by. It was then that Michael asked Cinderella to marry him. She did not hesitate to say yes.
Eventually, Peter saw her home, but he did not linger. He did not want Cindy to catch him checking up on her. However Belinda did not return to an empty house. Nick had come round to see how his patient, Anna, was getting on. Anna had been well enough to go to work, but was glad to have someone to talk to after coming back from school. She happened to mention missing the opera and Nick had offered to take her later in the week.
Over the next few months, the three sisters seemed very busy.
One Friday evening, Cinderella went out to a musical with Michael. Afterwards, they went to an expensive, French restaurant. Cinderella had seen a lot of Michael since they had first gone to the opera together.
She enjoyed his company. He always knew of something exciting for them to do. He was a good talker and knew how to impress. He told her of his plans to give up teaching and go into his father’s business.
After dinner, they took a gentle stroll by the river and stopped to watch the water flow by. It was then that Michael asked Cinderella to marry him. She did not hesitate to say yes.
Anna had also gone out for the evening. She had gone with Nick, the young doctor, to see a play by Harold Pinter. Afterwards they went for a meal in a quiet restaurant. Anna had seen a lot of Nick over the previous few months. They shared a similar serious outlook on life.
They both took their work very seriously and worked long hours. They admired each other’s commitment and shared a common concern for others. They started talking about how much they enjoyed each other’s company and they mutually agreed that they should get married.
They both took their work very seriously and worked long hours. They admired each other’s commitment and shared a common concern for others. They started talking about how much they enjoyed each other’s company and they mutually agreed that they should get married.
Belinda, on her way back home from work, met up with Peter and a few friends for a drink. Later some of them decided to go to an Indian restaurant for a meal. It was an informal gathering and Belinda enjoyed the casual gossiping. She found Peter easy to get on with and he seemed to like her dark humour. They had been out together many times in the previous few months. They just enjoyed each other’s company and not being alone.
After the meal, the group split up to go home, as it was getting late. As Peter walked with Belinda to the underground station, Peter suggested the idea of getting married. At first Belinda thought he was joking and burst out laughing, but then she saw the look on his face. After a moment’s hesitation, as she tried to think clearly, she agreed to the suggestion.
Anna and Cinderella were both waiting for her by the time Belinda got home. She had decided not to tell them her news, but, when they both said that they were getting engaged, she had to tell them.
The next day, Cinderella went out shopping with Michael and Belinda rang Peter to check that he really had meant what he had said the previous evening. Anna went on preparing her lessons as usual.
That afternoon, they phoned their parents. It was a long call. Mr. and Mrs. Smith took a while to take it all in. Their next visit to England was spent meeting all the future in-laws and planning for the big event. It had been agreed that the three sisters would all get married at the same time, “to get it all over in one go”, as Mr. Smith put it.
The wedding preparations were frantic. Everyone had their own ideas about how things should be done. Anna would fume at the waste, as Cinderella merrily ordered expensive frills, while Belinda tried to keep the peace.
The wedding was a grand, if complicated occasion. The brides all wore white and , thanks to Cinderella, were all late to the church. At the reception, the speeches went on a long time, with everyone making the same jokes about Cinderella and the ugly sisters.
And it came to pass that nine months later the three sisters each gave birth to a son. Mr. Smith was delighted at last to have male descendents, even though none of them would be carrying on the family name. Things were complicated enough already without having any more Mr. Smiths around.
And they all lived happily ever after.
The End.
After the meal, the group split up to go home, as it was getting late. As Peter walked with Belinda to the underground station, Peter suggested the idea of getting married. At first Belinda thought he was joking and burst out laughing, but then she saw the look on his face. After a moment’s hesitation, as she tried to think clearly, she agreed to the suggestion.
Anna and Cinderella were both waiting for her by the time Belinda got home. She had decided not to tell them her news, but, when they both said that they were getting engaged, she had to tell them.
The next day, Cinderella went out shopping with Michael and Belinda rang Peter to check that he really had meant what he had said the previous evening. Anna went on preparing her lessons as usual.
That afternoon, they phoned their parents. It was a long call. Mr. and Mrs. Smith took a while to take it all in. Their next visit to England was spent meeting all the future in-laws and planning for the big event. It had been agreed that the three sisters would all get married at the same time, “to get it all over in one go”, as Mr. Smith put it.
The wedding preparations were frantic. Everyone had their own ideas about how things should be done. Anna would fume at the waste, as Cinderella merrily ordered expensive frills, while Belinda tried to keep the peace.
The wedding was a grand, if complicated occasion. The brides all wore white and , thanks to Cinderella, were all late to the church. At the reception, the speeches went on a long time, with everyone making the same jokes about Cinderella and the ugly sisters.
And it came to pass that nine months later the three sisters each gave birth to a son. Mr. Smith was delighted at last to have male descendents, even though none of them would be carrying on the family name. Things were complicated enough already without having any more Mr. Smiths around.
And they all lived happily ever after.
The End.
©Conor Cotter
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